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5 Mistakes to Avoid When Writing a Fundraising Appeal Letter

The fundraising appeal letter is a difficult one to pen. At its foundation, you’re asking people to part with their hard-earned money, so you’re going to need to present them with a solid case that they’ll understand and connect with.

Of course, there are a lot of charities and organizations out there that are writing these letters, but many of them fall into a trap. From large-scale businesses to the smallest and most local nonprofit organizations, everybody makes mistakes, even when it comes to fundraising letters.

Let’s explore the most common mistakes you could make when writing your fundraising appeal letter, so you can avoid them at all costs.

1. Not including details of your cause

When you’re writing your letter, it’s easy to assume that the people reading your letter already know what your cause is. At the end of the day, your cause is just one of many things on your reader’s plate. Give them more details than you think they need, just to be safe.

2. Treating every letter the same

You never know who is actually going to read your letter after you’ve sent it, whether they’ve been following your organization for years or they’ve never heard of you. This means you’ll need to include all the information you can in order to draw in those all-important donations.

“However, you don’t want to overwhelm your readers with information. When writing your letter, stick to one point or program that you’re trying to convey and then provide all the details the reader needs to know on that subject matter,” explains Bernice Backer, a Public Relations Manager at Resumention and Huffington Post contributor.

3. Leaving out donation achievements

One of the most important aspects that you’ll need to include in your fundraising appeal letter is sharing just how your reader’s donations help your cause. This is something that’s essential in your letter.

Showing how the donations are spent and what good things your organization can achieve with the money is vital to the success of your letter and getting people to donate.

4. Using long-form content unnecessarily

People hate it when you beat around the bush. If you’re passionate about something and you want someone else to feel your passion, there’s no point in slowly moving into your subject matter.

Go straight to the point with what you’re writing, and readers will really appreciate it.

5. Not inspiring people

When you’re writing your letter, it’s easy to make the mistake of try to scare your readers into donating with imagery or grave language. However, it’s much more effective to be inspirational and uplifting in your letters. Those feelings are what drive donations.

Of course, you’re going to want to include facts and figures that prove your cause has legitimacy. However, it’s equally important to include information on the progress your organization has made.

Writing a fundraising appeal letter requires balance and content that makes an impact on your readers. Finding this balance may take a little practice, but once you’re there, the return on investment will be unparalleled.

By following these tips, you can greatly improve the impact that your fundraising letter has with your readers, helping you boost the overall success of your campaign.

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  1. AL RAMOS says:


  2. Brenda says:

    Useful post, It’s best to learn from other’s mistakes than to feel the urge to commit one by oneself & then think of learning. I think we’ve all made some of these mistakes to some degree or another.

  3. Julius Rosen says:

    Short and to the point . also say what your last year’s goal was and this year… Dont forget Thank you’s ////

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